Question for you ladies. I read through Maren's half of chapter five and made some edits (I actually lost my original comments. I printed it out and edited on paper, then mistakenly shredded them. I'm lame), and then I read what Lee posted, though I see that it isn't complete. My question is if you would rather I beta the chapter as a whole like I have for the previous chapters, or if you'd rather I give you comments as you go along. I could restrict my comments to characterization for the time being, then wait until the final version is ready for beta. Whatever works better for you guys. Let me know.